Some correction...

Hi, today I’m supposed to correct a Paulina’s article. So I choose this “The Lion King” article she wrote. The red words are the bad form and the green words are my corrections. I hope my correction is well.

The article:

Hello everyone! It’s time to talk about your favourite movie. In this opportunity i I will talk about "the lion king" (  ) film, this is one of my S favourites movies, (  ) the other S films that i I love is "avatar", but my classmate Pamela wrote is writing about it. The lion king is a movie produced T for by Walt Disney pictures, directed by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff

λ It’s  (  ) talk about ?M the tragedy of Hamlet in Shakespeare ???. The movie (  ) opened had its premiere in 1994, and i I saw it a couple of S years later, when i I was 10 years old.  It is one of my favourite S/P movies because λ is it’s really cute for S childrens and WE leave gives you a teaching about S to be being a supportive person and not selfish.
The story is about Simba, a lion cub, T W.O successor to the throne and the throne successor of from his father Mufasa, his father (the lion king). His uncle Scar killed (  ) to Mufasa, and Simba S run ran away to the jungle because T of for feels feelings of guilt. A couple of years later, Simba -now adult- came back T for to be T a the new lion king, but T in at this moment his uncle Scar was the king. Simba, after λ talking with many friends (timon, pumba and rafiki) and λ after WE saw talks to WW in the heaven the spirit of his father who appears in the sky, demand his throne to Scar and obliged him λ to tell the true about (  ) on his father's death.
After a battle, Scar was killed and Simba takes the throne.

Corrected version:

Hello everyone! It’s time to talk about your favourite movie. In this opportunity I will talk about "the lion king", this is one of my favourite movies, other films that I love is "avatar", but my classmate Pamela is writing about it. The lion king is a movie produced by Walt Disney pictures, directed by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff.

It’s about ???. The movie had its premiere in 1994, and I saw it a couple of years later, when I was 10 years old.  It is one of my favourite movies because it’s really cute for children and gives you a teaching about being a supportive person and not selfish.
The story is about Simba, a lion cub, and the throne successor from Mufasa, his father (the lion king). His uncle Scar killed Mufasa, and Simba ran away to the jungle because of feelings of guilt. A couple of years later, Simba -now adult- came back to be the new lion king, but at this moment his uncle Scar was the king. Simba, after talking with many friends (Timon, Pumba and Rafiki) and after talks to the spirit of his father who appears in the sky, Simba demands his throne to Scar and obliged him to tell the true about his father's death.
After a battle, Scar was killed and Simba takes the throne.